Coach's Review

    Today we sent our movie to our soccer coach. Violet, Parker and I are all on the same team, so we thought Coach Jamie would be a good person to send it too. The movie isn't completely done yet, but we thought it would be good to get a second opinion now, so we can fix anything we need to before moving on. We picked Coach Jamie because we trust her. She is very honest, and she knows how important this project is. If she sees anything wrong with it, she would let us know. Once we sent it to her and she watched it, she responded saying she was really impressed. This was something we were all very happy to hear. 

    She did offer us some suggestions though. Although she said our work was very good so far, she gave us a few tips as a viewer. She said that the lighting in the beginning of the video was a little weird. Maybe even too dark. We were surprised at this, because we had thought the lighting was fine. We had dimmed the lights to make the scene more eerie and creepy. We just hadn't realized we had done a little too much. That was her biggest critique, and one we set out to change right away. We are going to re film the scene tomorrow, and fix the lighting. I'm glad that she told us it was too dark, because we can fix it now. She also had some compliments as well. Her main one being that the blood looked really good! This we were all pretty proud of. Because it took a while to find the perfect recipe for the fake blood, we were happy it paid off.